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Overall, well done! There are a few tweaks to be done here and there, but it's certainly a great start. Your technique is good but coul...

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JayFan67
Do all that you do in love.
Artist | Hobbyist | Traditional Art
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Hi! I'm JayFan, but call me JF! I'm an artist in various mediums, including music and writing.

And by the way, I'm thinking about setting up commission prices soon, so if you think I'm good enough, soon you'll be able to request a drawing!

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Whiteboard Doodle Dump
A doodle dump I did on my whiteboard with angimiko, crossposted on her account!

There are a few jokes on here (also, angi's twin sister did the two in the bottom right), see if you can find the characters!
(Mikasa, Garnet, Asuna Yuuki, my OC Emerald, Napstablook, Bill Cipher, the cat from Sailor Moon, and Harry Potter, as well as portraits of each other)

See if you can tell our art apart! :D (also we only had two pinks, a red, a green, and a black, plus a thin pink and thin black)

Done over the course of two days!
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5/27/17

hats
pink and blue and black
potatoes are in burlap bags
sacks and sacks and another potato sack

why do people say 'by the skin of my teeth'?
that's just plain gross
i can't think of anything
whew, a rhyme, close

if i could fly
i'd go to the moon
not because i want to
but because it's too soon

too soon to say i give up trying to make this rhyme anymore
Overall, well done! There are a few tweaks to be done here and there, but it's certainly a great start.

Your technique is good but could stand improvement in the shading/highlighting. Try using lighter shades of the colors you're highlighting (i.e. a slightly darker brown for shading the hair, and a lighter skin tone color for the face, etc.). Also, try to imagine the direction the light is coming from and shade accordingly, as the head is shaded from the right while the torso is shaded from the left.

The stance could also use a little work, as it looks a tad odd. A straighter back might do the trick. Your lines are very clean, so that helps define the stance a bit. Try tilting your canvas a bit to the left during the process of sketching the lines to try to tame the natural curvature.

There's not much more I can say about this piece. You have a nice OC, so that part is down. She's portrayed in a pleasant light, and the light colors are kind to the eyes. Well done, you're on your way to art mastery!

-JF
sky
it is quite truly blue
it's the sky or is it flies?
do you like the air
sky
A good chunk the reader x Character oneshots on FFN:
OC: "oh character...~"
Character: "OC..."
*insert awful confession/first kiss scene*

No offense intended to any reader x Character authors out there :)
5/27/17

hats
pink and blue and black
potatoes are in burlap bags
sacks and sacks and another potato sack

why do people say 'by the skin of my teeth'?
that's just plain gross
i can't think of anything
whew, a rhyme, close

if i could fly
i'd go to the moon
not because i want to
but because it's too soon

too soon to say i give up trying to make this rhyme anymore

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JayFan67 Featured By Owner 17 hours ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you very much for the invite and the warm welcome! :D I'll do my best to be a good member of the group!
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JayFan67 Featured By Owner 17 hours ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
As of yet, no, thanks! :D
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Yo
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JayFan67 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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JayFan67 Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL XD
how goes it (oh nm you're on Steam)
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GraySlate Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the fave of my sketch! :D
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You're welcome! :D
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